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Friday, September 27, 2019

Time



Hi there! Haven't seen me under here for a while. I'm greeting and explaining here because I thought that the prezi would be better without it. Time is a poem that I created and presented to the class. Everyone said that it was pretty good so I decided to show it to you too. It's a free verse poem. Free verse poems sometimes don't rhyme or repeat phrases so it has less of a rhythm and is more story like. It's a bit challenging explaining time itself but I think I nailed it. Hope you'll enjoy it. Bye!
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3 comments:

  1. Grant MSeptember 30, 2019 at 7:26 AM

    A deep and meaningful poem for a deep and meaningful subject. A lifetime on earth is less than a second in the universe. Hmmmm..........

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  2. AnonymousOctober 13, 2019 at 9:06 PM

    Hello Mika, it's me Parwin!

    I loved your poem as it is pretty challenging to write something for a subject that is serious because a lot of people did like a funny poem or had a funny subject but your one was very meaningful and deep as you dad has said.

    This reminds me of my poem that I wrote and don't know if I have shared it on blogger, I don't think I have but I know for a fact that your poem was way better than mine. In fact, I think it might be the best along with Mia's and Nikita's and some others.

    I think to improve, you could keep doing what you are now because you did an awesome work! I really liked your Prezi as well because the Background sort of really matched the poem.

    Why did you decide to do your poem about 'Time'?

    Awesome work!



    Looking forward to your next posts,
    Parwin

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    1. AnonymousOctober 16, 2019 at 1:42 PM

      Hi Parwin!

      Thanks for commenting on my blog. I'm glad that you've enjoyed my poem. Why did I make a poem about time? It's because I thought that writing something about what I think often would be an easy poem to make. I think about: death, time, the fait of the world and how highschool is going to be. Isn't that wonderful. Sorry, I got in a bit of a tangent there.

      Anyway, what kind of poems do you like making? Who's your favourite poet? Hope to see your reply, bye!

      From Mika

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