Thursday, May 2, 2019
A Day in the Woods
Hi everyone, it's good to be back after the holdidays. Still have highschool to worry about though. Anyway, this is a holiday recount about my family leaving camp. I'd like to get some feedback on how to improve it and if there's any mistakes. The hard part of making a recount is to actually finish it. I've got a lot of unfinished stories. I should probaly go and finish them all. What did you do in the holidays? I hope to chat to you in the comments and bye!
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Hi Mika. Great story. I really enjoyed the novel way you have presented our camping holiday. Some really great artwork too. Yes we will be going to Japan this year. Probably not September because the Rugby World Cup is in Japan this September. May have to be before or after.
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