A Day in the Woods

Hi everyone, it's good to be back after the holdidays. Still have highschool to worry about though. Anyway, this is a holiday recount about my family leaving camp. I'd like to get some feedback on how to improve it and if there's any mistakes. The hard part of making a recount is to actually finish it. I've got a lot of unfinished stories. I should probaly go and finish them all. What did you do in the holidays? I hope to chat to you in the comments and bye!